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Post by Aleu on Nov 25, 2006 13:45:17 GMT -5
Chapter 1.
Aleu Turner sat down on the sand. Her black hair was waving in the wind. She soon heard Captain Jacklyn Sparrow walking up towards her. "Ahoy," Jacklyn said. "Ahoy cookies?" Aleu said, looking behind her. Jacklyn rolled her eyes and sat down beside Aleu. "Where's the crew?" Aleu said. "Somewhere around the island.." Jacklyn murmured. "Oh." "We haven't been able to repair the ship.." Aleu didn't say anything after that. Jacklyn's old ship, the Black Pearl, was stolen by The Royal Navy not to long ago, and they threw Jacklyn's crew off onto the island. They still were thinking of ways to repair a ship, but there was no way they could.. yet..
Jacklyn was Jack Sparrow's wife, of course. He had disappeared when the crew was thrown onto the island, along with Will Turner. Jacklyn set out some of the crew to go look for them, but nothing was found.
"Rum?" Jacklyn asked Aleu. "Uh, okay, sure," Aleu replied. Jacklyn handed Aleu some rum. Aleu started to drink it and became drunk, then Jacklyn started to drink it. Once they were drunk, they started to get hot.. and hotter. They turned around. Fire!
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Post by Aleu on Nov 25, 2006 13:54:09 GMT -5
Chapter 2.
The crew started to run out of the forest island. "Fire!" they shouted. "We know!" Jacklyn shouted back. Taii and Leon were last to run out of the fire. They had burns on their arms.
They had no buckets, of course. The crew started to run along the sea, trying to get away from the fire.
Once they got to a safe part of the island, they watched as the fire burned were they had been sheltering. "Well, that was a waste of shelter," Aleu groaned. "At least it kept us sheltered why it could," Faye said. "We'll build a new shelter," Jacklyn said. "I can gather food," Shay offered. "Okay.." Jacklyn said.
Jacklyn stood in front of the crew and said, "Shay, get the food. Aleu, find a good spot to set up shelter. Faye, Taii, Leon, find wood we can use for a fire." The chosen pirates nodded and ran into the remaining forest of the island.
Jacklyn stood at the beach. She sat down and drank the only bottle of rum left. She looked out into the sea and murmured to herself, "when me find my ship back, ye Navys are dead."
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Post by Aleu on Nov 25, 2006 15:45:43 GMT -5
Chapter 3.
Aleu looked around for a big, nice spot for the crew to shelter. Too many trees were around to see. "Damn this is hard," Aleu groaned aloud. Suddenly, something bit Aleu's leg. She turned around. She saw a small, beagle dog nipping at her leg. Aleu bent down and grabbed the brown dog. "Are ye lost, too?" she asked the dog. The dog nodded and whimpered, like he understood her. Aleu set the dog down. She thought of a name to call the young puppy. "Shiloh," Aleu thought. Shiloh barked and wagged his tail. "Alright then," Aleu said, "Shiloh it is." Then the next moment, Aleu had an idea. What if Shiloh could sniff out a place? But before Aleu could think anything else, Shiloh started to run away. "Shiloh, come back!" Aleu called, running after Shiloh. Shiloh dodged the trees that they passed. Aleu, on the other hand, almost hit them. Then, she did hit one of them. Aleu fell back and lay on the ground. Shiloh was gone.
Aleu got back to her feet and looked around. Shiloh had led Aleu to the place she needed to look for! This was perfect for shelter. It was a large, clear spot with trees around it and hovering over it were branches with beautiful leaves on it. Aleu was speechless. She turned around and rushed back to Jacklyn.
"Jacklyn! Jacklyn!" Aleu cried. Jacklyn turned around and said, "aye? What is it?" "I found the perfect spot!" "Take me to it," Jacklyn said. Aleu nodded and started to run with Jacklyn close behind.
"See?" Aleu said. "Wow," Jacklyn said in amusement. She looked around at the amazing place. "Go back to the beach and wait for the others," Jacklyn said. Aleu nodded and ran back to the beach.
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Post by Jacklyn on Nov 26, 2006 11:57:49 GMT -5
>.> Awesome. But we needs more.. MORE I SAY!! :}
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Post by i8plunder8ramen on Nov 26, 2006 13:14:24 GMT -5
X3 Shiiiiiloooohh~~ OMG, I read that in 5th grade. The book about the beagle. Which always scared me, because I HAD a beagle, and the senseless violence it went through made me cry. ;_; Waitaminute!! You don't know me! I'm... Ariel's random friend... Nikki. BUT YOU CAN CALL MEH NIKKEH!!! 8DDD *bricked* Erm... >_> Aaaanyway... I really like the story! Please continue! ^__^
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Post by Jacklyn on Nov 26, 2006 13:29:42 GMT -5
Nukeh.. dewd. PILLS. >.> Ruddeh does look like Shiloh though.. o.o
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Post by Aleu on Nov 26, 2006 16:42:56 GMT -5
Chapter 4.
"Hey guys," Aleu called as the crew entered the beach, "I found a camp we can shelter in, follow me." "Ugh. More walking," Leon groaned. Aleu led the crew to the spot she had found.
"There ye are," Jacklyn said. The crew dropped the supplies, and sat down.
"Captain Jacklyn," Katie said, "do ye hear that?" "No?" Jacklyn said. "Listen." Jacklyn listened. "More pirates are on this island, aren't they." "Aye."
Shay looked over at Jacklyn and said, "they aren't pirates. Its the Royal Navy. I saw them. They're looking for us." "That must mean the Black Pearl is around!" Aleu cut in. "We gotta get back to the beach.. look for the Black Pearl." "We gotta rest," Faye said. "True, Skittles, you go look." "Aye." Skittles got up and ran out of camp.
Jacklyn looked over at Aleu. "Tis a nice spot, Aleu," Jacklyn said. "I know." Aleu said, smiling. Jacklyn looked up at the stars and said, "we can't leave without Jack and Will.." "We have to." Aleu said, "we can come back for them." "Aye.. I guess.."
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The next morning..
"Skittles!" Aleu said as she saw Skittles enter the camp. "Skittles, what took ye so long?" Jacklyn murmured. "Yes, they brought the Black Pearl. "..Bait," Aleu groaned. Jacklyn looked at Aleu and said, "what?" "Its bait for them to find us and kill us." "Aye.. we'll sneak it," Jacklyn said. Jacklyn gave the crew a bottle of rum and said, "cheer for luck." "For luck!" The crew said, cheering their bottles together. The drank some and put it down.
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Post by Aleu on Nov 26, 2006 18:02:51 GMT -5
Chapter 5.
Jacklyn, Aleu, and the crew stood behind the bushes, waiting for the Navy to leave the Black Pearl alone. The admiral nodded his head and the Navy walked off. "Now," Jacklyn whispered. The crew snuck closer and closer to the Black Pearl.
Once they were there, Aleu swung herself onto the ship. She made sure everyone was on the ship.
"Ugh!" Shay shouted. Aleu turned around. Some of the Navy was still on board! One had shoved a sword into Shay's back. Shay was dead.
"Attack!" Jacklyn shouted. Aleu unleashed her sword. The crew started to fight the Navy.
Before a Navy could sneak up on Aleu, she spun around and shoved a sword into it's back. There was another sailor behind him. He started to unleash his sword and started to try and kill Aleu. The two fought with their swords rubbing and hitting against each other. Aleu backflipped and tripped the sailor. He fought laying down. "Damn!" Aleu shouted. He rose back to his feet, making Aleu step back. "Bring it," Aleu challenged. She stepped onto the Black Pearl's stairs and fought. She suddenly knocked the sword out of the sailor's hand! It flew overboard and stuck straight into the sand. She jumped onto the sailor and killed him.
"Throw 'em overboard!" Jacklyn ordered. "Aye!" Aleu shouted back. The crew grabbed the Navy's shirts and swung them overboard.
Jacklyn jumped up and started to move the wheel and made the ship move. "Fair well," Jacklyn called at the Navy, "the Black Pearl is once again our's!" Then the Black Pearl disappeared into the ocean with the pirates aboard.
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Post by katie on Nov 26, 2006 18:44:09 GMT -5
Awesome! Wheres My Cleaning Part! xD
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